From b53b5d386d976e2770b9bc325fb96faaec5c94d8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Glenn Morris <rgm@gnu.org>
Date: Mon, 6 Jul 2009 00:53:13 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] (defvar and asterisk): Minor rephrasing.

---
 doc/lispintro/ChangeLog             | 4 ++++
 doc/lispintro/emacs-lisp-intro.texi | 6 +++---
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/lispintro/ChangeLog b/doc/lispintro/ChangeLog
index f0c75f1743c..2b5bd55b59e 100644
--- a/doc/lispintro/ChangeLog
+++ b/doc/lispintro/ChangeLog
@@ -1,3 +1,7 @@
+2009-07-06  Glenn Morris  <rgm@gnu.org>
+
+	* emacs-lisp-intro.texi (defvar and asterisk): Minor rephrasing.
+
 2009-06-14  Chong Yidong  <cyd@stupidchicken.com>
 
 	* emacs-lisp-intro.texi (edebug): Fix typo.
diff --git a/doc/lispintro/emacs-lisp-intro.texi b/doc/lispintro/emacs-lisp-intro.texi
index 996fd3d58fe..b528150097d 100644
--- a/doc/lispintro/emacs-lisp-intro.texi
+++ b/doc/lispintro/emacs-lisp-intro.texi
@@ -9465,9 +9465,9 @@ the Customization commands.  (@xref{defcustom, , Specifying Variables
 using @code{defcustom}}.)
 
 When you specified a variable using the @code{defvar} special form,
-you could distinguish a readily settable variable from others by
-typing an asterisk, @samp{*}, in the first column of its documentation
-string.  For example:
+you could distinguish a variable that a user might want to change from
+others by typing an asterisk, @samp{*}, in the first column of its
+documentation string.  For example:
 
 @smallexample
 @group
-- 
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