From: Richard M. Stallman <rms@gnu.org>
Date: Thu, 5 Jan 2006 03:33:25 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: (Misc Network, Make Network): Minor cleanups.
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(Misc Network, Make Network): Minor cleanups.
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diff --git a/lispref/ChangeLog b/lispref/ChangeLog
index 990983b9cba..bbaf2407d63 100644
--- a/lispref/ChangeLog
+++ b/lispref/ChangeLog
@@ -1,3 +1,7 @@
+2006-01-04  Richard M. Stallman  <rms@gnu.org>
+
+	* processes.texi (Misc Network, Make Network): Minor cleanups.
+
 2006-01-04  Kim F. Storm  <storm@cua.dk>
 
 	* processes.texi (Make Network): Add IPv6 addresses and handling.
diff --git a/lispref/processes.texi b/lispref/processes.texi
index 7b775424304..14fd069dc01 100644
--- a/lispref/processes.texi
+++ b/lispref/processes.texi
@@ -1782,10 +1782,11 @@ the system select an unused port number.
 
 @item :family @var{family}
 @var{family} specifies the address (and protocol) family for
-communication.  @code{nil} stands for automatically determine a the
-proper address family for the given @var{host} and @var{service}.
-@code{local} specifies a Unix socket, in which case @var{host} is ignored.
-@code{ipv4} and @code{ipv6} specify to use IPv4 and IPv6 respectively.
+communication.  @code{nil} means determine the proper address family
+automatically for the given @var{host} and @var{service}.
+@code{local} specifies a Unix socket, in which case @var{host} is
+ignored.  @code{ipv4} and @code{ipv6} specify to use IPv4 and IPv6
+respectively.
 
 @item :local @var{local-address}
 For a server process, @var{local-address} is the address to listen on.
@@ -2055,18 +2056,20 @@ The current flags of the interface.
 @defun format-network-address address &optional omit-port
 This function converts the Lisp representation of a network address to
 a string.
-  A five-element vector @code{[@var{a} @var{b}
-@var{c} @var{d} @var{p}]} represents an IPv4 address
-@var{a}.@var{b}.@var{c}.@var{d} and port number @var{p}.
-@code{format-network-address} converts that to the string
-@code{"@var{a}.@var{b}.@var{c}.@var{d}:@var{p}"}.
-  A nine-element vector @code{[@var{a} @var{b} @var{c} @var{d} @var{e}
+
+A five-element vector @code{[@var{a} @var{b} @var{c} @var{d} @var{p}]}
+represents an IPv4 address @var{a}.@var{b}.@var{c}.@var{d} and port
+number @var{p}.  @code{format-network-address} converts that to the
+string @code{"@var{a}.@var{b}.@var{c}.@var{d}:@var{p}"}.
+
+A nine-element vector @code{[@var{a} @var{b} @var{c} @var{d} @var{e}
 @var{f} @var{g} @var{h} @var{p}]} represents an IPv6 address and port
 number.  @code{format-network-address} converts that to the string
 @code{"[@var{a}:@var{b}:@var{c}:@var{d}:@var{e}:@var{f}:@var{g}:@var{h}]:@var{p}"}.
 
-If the vector does not include the port number, @var{p}, or @var{omit-port} is
-non-@code{nil}, the result does not include the @code{:@var{p}} suffix.
+If the vector does not include the port number, @var{p}, or if
+@var{omit-port} is non-@code{nil}, the result does not include the
+@code{:@var{p}} suffix.
 @end defun
 
 @node Byte Packing