From: Glenn Morris <rgm@gnu.org>
Date: Sat, 28 Apr 2012 07:45:03 +0000 (-0700)
Subject: Reword some doc/emacs to remove/reduce some overly long/short lines.
X-Git-Tag: emacs-24.0.97~88
X-Git-Url: http://git.eshelyaron.com/gitweb/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=9eb25ee858d889a0fb45b4b10fbacb6002aae7ee;p=emacs.git

Reword some doc/emacs to remove/reduce some overly long/short lines.

* xresources.texi (Resources):
* mule.texi (Language Environments):
* misc.texi (Amusements):
* maintaining.texi (VC Change Log):
* frames.texi (Fonts):
* custom.texi (Specifying File Variables, Minibuffer Maps):
* cmdargs.texi (Initial Options):
* building.texi (Flymake):
Reword to remove/reduce some overly long/short lines.
---

diff --git a/doc/emacs/ChangeLog b/doc/emacs/ChangeLog
index 32a5e43b41b..91f50958920 100644
--- a/doc/emacs/ChangeLog
+++ b/doc/emacs/ChangeLog
@@ -1,3 +1,15 @@
+2012-04-28  Glenn Morris  <rgm@gnu.org>
+
+	* xresources.texi (Resources):
+	* mule.texi (Language Environments):
+	* misc.texi (Amusements):
+	* maintaining.texi (VC Change Log):
+	* frames.texi (Fonts):
+	* custom.texi (Specifying File Variables, Minibuffer Maps):
+	* cmdargs.texi (Initial Options):
+	* building.texi (Flymake):
+	Reword to remove/reduce some overly long/short lines.
+
 2012-04-27  Glenn Morris  <rgm@gnu.org>
 
 	* emacs.texi: Some fixes for detailed menu.
diff --git a/doc/emacs/building.texi b/doc/emacs/building.texi
index 4b92376b8a9..999afa7df2c 100644
--- a/doc/emacs/building.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/building.texi
@@ -426,11 +426,11 @@ syntax checking tool used depends on the language; for example, for
 C/C++ files this is usually the C compiler.  Flymake can also use
 build tools such as @code{make} for checking complicated projects.
 
-  To enable Flymake mode, type @kbd{M-x flymake-mode}.  You can go to
-the errors found by Flymake mode with @kbd{M-x
-flymake-goto-next-error} and @kbd{M-x flymake-goto-prev-error}.  To
-display any error messages associated with the current line, use
-@kbd{M-x flymake-display-err-menu-for-current-line}.
+  To enable Flymake mode, type @kbd{M-x flymake-mode}.  You can jump to
+the errors that it finds by using @kbd{M-x
+flymake-goto-next-error} and @kbd{M-x flymake-goto-prev-error}.
+Use the command @kbd{M-x flymake-display-err-menu-for-current-line}
+to display any error messages associated with the current line.
 
   For more details about using Flymake,
 @ifnottex
diff --git a/doc/emacs/cmdargs.texi b/doc/emacs/cmdargs.texi
index 222aa0f8434..c387b99915f 100644
--- a/doc/emacs/cmdargs.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/cmdargs.texi
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ in your initialization file (@pxref{Entering Emacs}).
 @opindex -Q
 @itemx --quick
 @opindex --quick
-Start emacs with minimum customizations, similar to using @samp{-q},
+Start emacs with minimum customizations.  This is similar to using @samp{-q},
 @samp{--no-site-file}, @samp{--no-site-lisp}, and @samp{--no-splash}
 together.  This also stops Emacs from processing X resources by
 setting @code{inhibit-x-resources} to @code{t} (@pxref{Resources}).
diff --git a/doc/emacs/custom.texi b/doc/emacs/custom.texi
index cfd45de6aca..bf2602f8f08 100644
--- a/doc/emacs/custom.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/custom.texi
@@ -1054,8 +1054,8 @@ pair with a colon and semicolon.  The special variable/value pair
 @findex add-file-local-variable-prop-line
 @findex delete-file-local-variable-prop-line
 @findex copy-dir-locals-to-file-locals-prop-line
-  Instead of adding variable/value pairs by hand, you can use the
-command @kbd{M-x add-file-local-variable-prop-line}.  This prompts for
+  You can use the command @kbd{M-x add-file-local-variable-prop-line}
+instead of adding entries by hand.  It prompts for
 a variable and value, and adds them to the first line in the
 appropriate way.  @kbd{M-x delete-file-local-variable-prop-line}
 prompts for a variable, and deletes its entry from the line.  @kbd{M-x
@@ -1522,7 +1522,7 @@ circumstances.
 @vindex minibuffer-local-completion-map
 @vindex minibuffer-local-must-match-map
 @vindex minibuffer-local-filename-completion-map
-@vindex minibuffer-local-must-match-filename-map
+@vindex minibuffer-local-filename-must-match-map
   The minibuffer has its own set of local keymaps; they contain various
 completion and exit commands.
 
@@ -1539,7 +1539,7 @@ just like @key{RET}.
 for cautious completion.
 @item
 @code{minibuffer-local-filename-completion-map} and
-@code{minibuffer-local-must-match-filename-map} are like the two
+@code{minibuffer-local-filename-must-match-map} are like the two
 previous ones, but they are specifically for file name completion.
 They do not bind @key{SPC}.
 @end itemize
diff --git a/doc/emacs/frames.texi b/doc/emacs/frames.texi
index 9e9909e8bca..7b912ec9722 100644
--- a/doc/emacs/frames.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/frames.texi
@@ -666,8 +666,8 @@ The font slant---normally @samp{r} (roman), @samp{i} (italic),
 Some font names support other values.
 @item widthtype
 The font width---normally @samp{normal}, @samp{condensed},
-@samp{extended}, or @samp{semicondensed} (some font names support
-other values).
+@samp{semicondensed}, or @samp{extended}.  Some font names support
+other values.
 @item style
 An optional additional style name.  Usually it is empty---most XLFDs
 have two hyphens in a row at this point.
diff --git a/doc/emacs/maintaining.texi b/doc/emacs/maintaining.texi
index 9d56b3bdc6e..72583f25c8b 100644
--- a/doc/emacs/maintaining.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/maintaining.texi
@@ -893,7 +893,7 @@ Display the change history for the current repository
 (@code{vc-print-root-log}).
 
 @item C-x v I
-Display the changes that will be received with a pull operation
+Display the changes that a pull operation will retrieve
 (@code{vc-log-incoming}).
 
 @item C-x v O
diff --git a/doc/emacs/misc.texi b/doc/emacs/misc.texi
index b91763116b8..ecbcda1ce8a 100644
--- a/doc/emacs/misc.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/misc.texi
@@ -2481,8 +2481,8 @@ find the one you select (@code{ffap-menu}).
 
 @findex animate-birthday-present
 @cindex animate
-  The @code{animate} package makes text dance.  For an example, try
-@kbd{M-x animate-birthday-present}.
+  The @code{animate} package makes text dance (e.g. try
+@kbd{M-x animate-birthday-present}).
 
 @findex blackbox
 @findex mpuz
diff --git a/doc/emacs/mule.texi b/doc/emacs/mule.texi
index 9c1d908f882..cffcb7573ff 100644
--- a/doc/emacs/mule.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/mule.texi
@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ to the Emacs session.  The supported language environments
 @cindex Euro sign
 @cindex UTF-8
 @quotation
-ASCII, Belarusian, Bengali, Brazilian Portuguese, Bulgarian,
+ASCII, Belarusian, Bengali, Brazilian Portuguese, Bulgarian, Cham,
 Chinese-BIG5, Chinese-CNS, Chinese-EUC-TW, Chinese-GB, Chinese-GBK,
 Chinese-GB18030, Croatian, Cyrillic-ALT, Cyrillic-ISO, Cyrillic-KOI8,
 Czech, Devanagari, Dutch, English, Esperanto, Ethiopic, French,
diff --git a/doc/emacs/xresources.texi b/doc/emacs/xresources.texi
index 66281d6dbbb..b99c98d84e0 100644
--- a/doc/emacs/xresources.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/xresources.texi
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ its own list of resources; to update it, use the command
 @command{xrdb}---for instance, @samp{xrdb ~/.Xdefaults}.
 
 @cindex registry, setting resources (MS-Windows)
-  (MS-Windows systems do not support X resource files; on Windows,
+  (MS-Windows systems do not support X resource files; on such systems,
 Emacs looks for X resources in the Windows Registry, first under the
 key @samp{HKEY_CURRENT_USER\SOFTWARE\GNU\Emacs}, which affects only
 the current user and override the system-wide settings, and then under