From: Stefan Kangas <stefan@marxist.se>
Date: Mon, 30 Nov 2020 18:56:59 +0000 (+0100)
Subject: * lisp/so-long.el: Doc fix to reduce use of passive voice.
X-Git-Tag: emacs-28.0.90~4988
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* lisp/so-long.el: Doc fix to reduce use of passive voice.
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diff --git a/lisp/so-long.el b/lisp/so-long.el
index 6ae8d0aec8a..431073a2a18 100644
--- a/lisp/so-long.el
+++ b/lisp/so-long.el
@@ -50,15 +50,14 @@
 ;; performance further, as well as making the so-long activity more obvious to
 ;; the user.  These kinds of minified files are typically not intended to be
 ;; edited, so not providing the usual editing mode in such cases will rarely be
-;; an issue.  However, should the user wish to do so, the original state of the
-;; buffer may be reinstated by calling `so-long-revert' (the key binding for
-;; which is advertised when the major mode change occurs).  If you prefer that
-;; the major mode not be changed, the `so-long-minor-mode' action can be
-;; configured.
+;; an issue.  However, you can reinstate the original state of the buffer by
+;; calling `so-long-revert' (the key binding of which is advertised when the major
+;; mode change occurs).  If you prefer that the major mode not be changed, you
+;; can customize the `so-long-minor-mode' action.
 ;;
 ;; The user options `so-long-action' and `so-long-action-alist' determine what
-;; will happen when `so-long' and `so-long-revert' are invoked, allowing
-;; alternative actions (including custom actions) to be configured.  As well as
+;; actions `so-long' and `so-long-revert' will take.  This allows you to configure
+;; alternative actions (including custom actions).  As well as
 ;; the major and minor mode actions provided by this library, `longlines-mode'
 ;; is also supported by default as an alternative action.
 ;;