Update bad NEWS post

diff --git a/source/posts/2023-12-10-bad-news.org b/source/posts/2023-12-10-bad-news.org
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--- a/source/posts/2023-12-10-bad-news.org
+++ b/source/posts/2023-12-10-bad-news.org
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@
 The [[note:emacs][Emacs]] master branch is broken---for good, it seems.  Emacs
 maintainers accepted a heavy-handed, harmful change, disregarding
 concerns voiced by multiple users and developers.  I've created a
-fixed, and improved, fork.  I'll be using and developing this fork,
-and you're welcome to join.
+fixed, and improved, Emacs fork.  I'll be using and developing this
+fork, and you're welcome to join.
 
 Let's take a step back.  What is the Emacs master branch?  That's
 essentially the development version of Emacs, and what will soon
@@ -48,8 +48,8 @@ But no more, not in GNU Emacs 30.  It's gone, without as much as a
 
 Surely, it's not too late to revert one bad change, right?  That's
 what I thought, unfortunately the Emacs maintainers seem bent on
-dismissing the community's outcry in a desperate and misguided attempt
-to save face.
+dismissing the community's outcry in an unwarranted and misguided
+attempt to save face.
 
 In fact, the core problems with this change were brought up already in
 the first technical [[https://yhetil.org/emacs/87sf67qqmp.fsf@web.de/][comment]] regarding this patch proposal, from
@@ -133,8 +133,8 @@ which was born from the master branch before this registers fiasco.
 If these changes will be reverted before Emacs 30, I'll surely
 consider switching back to building Emacs from the upstream master
 branch.  But in the meantime, and for the foreseeable future, I'll be
-keeping my main branch up to date by cherry picking good change (only)
-from the master branch.  And of course, I also improve it with
+keeping my main branch up to date by cherry picking (only) good
+changes from the master branch.  And of course, I also improve it with
 developments of my own.
 
 If you're interested, feel free to checkout my main branch from here: