* etc/NEWS: Improve wording of vc-git-log-output-coding-system etc.

diff --git a/etc/NEWS b/etc/NEWS
index 8e78b728b749ecad6001434d25fd11980ab69ece..42f54f39eb65fb6364aad04dcc2c586ff2793fbe 100644 (file)
--- a/etc/NEWS
+++ b/etc/NEWS
@@ -989,13 +989,13 @@ background or to the foreground.
 
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 *** New options for customizing encoding of Git commit log messages.
-The new options `vc-git-commits-coding-system' and
-`vc-git-log-output-coding-system' allow to customize the encoding of
-the log messages sent to Git when committing, and the decoding of the
-log messages read from Git history commands.  Both default to UTF-8;
-if you customize them, make sure they are consistent with the Git
-config variables i18n.commitEncoding and i18n.logOutputEncoding.
-(`vc-git-commits-coding-system' existed previously, but was a
+The new user options 'vc-git-commits-coding-system' and
+'vc-git-log-output-coding-system' specify the encoding of log messages
+sent to Git when committing, and the decoding of log messages read
+from Git history commands.  These options default to UTF-8; if
+customized, they should be consistent with the Git config variables
+i18n.commitEncoding and i18n.logOutputEncoding.
+('vc-git-commits-coding-system' existed previously, but was a
 variable, not a user option.)
 
 +++