; * etc/NEWS: Fix wording of a recently added entry.

diff --git a/etc/NEWS b/etc/NEWS
index e6b90365e3b091eb57318458ec43b0456134236b..d17e1f1f89f4ae74dcdba7e4515de08be3409ed4 100644 (file)
--- a/etc/NEWS
+++ b/etc/NEWS
@@ -35,11 +35,11 @@ This means it should be less necessary to disable the likes of
 `select-active-regions' when Emacs is running over a slow network
 connection.
 
-** Emacs will now redisplay frames that are made visible by a compositor.
-This means even if `frame-visible-p' returns nil or `icon', the frame
-will be redisplayed if it is being displayed to the user by the
-compositing manager, which can happenas part of a preview for
-iconified windows.
+** Emacs now updates invisible frames that are made visible by a compositor.
+If an invisible or an iconified frame is shown to the user by the
+compositing manager, Emacs will now redisplay such a frame even though
+'frame-visible-' returns nil or 'icon' for it.  This can happen, for
+example, as part of preview for iconified frames.
 
 \f
 * Editing Changes in Emacs 30.1