Clarify `version-control' in the Emacs manual

* doc/emacs/files.texi (Backup Names): Rephrase for greater
clarity (bug#56291).

diff --git a/doc/emacs/files.texi b/doc/emacs/files.texi
index fa02d264f978bce2971eb4d47673eec3c4075255..7b4e31e5f848d9f90a64d0df87ede6ba09f40931 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/emacs/files.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/files.texi
@@ -655,10 +655,10 @@ Never make numbered backups; always make single backups.
 The usual way to set this variable is globally, through your init file
 or the customization buffer.  However, you can set
 @code{version-control} locally in an individual buffer to control the
-making of backups for that buffer's file (@pxref{Locals}).  You can
-have Emacs set @code{version-control} locally whenever you visit a
-given file (@pxref{File Variables}).  Some modes, such as Rmail mode,
-set this variable.
+making of backups for that buffer's file (@pxref{Locals}).  Some
+modes, such as Rmail mode, set this variable.  You can also have Emacs
+set @code{version-control} locally whenever you visit a given file
+(@pxref{File Variables}).
 
 @cindex @env{VERSION_CONTROL} environment variable
   If you set the environment variable @env{VERSION_CONTROL}, to tell