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 * Installation Changes in Emacs 28.1
 
 ** Emacs now optionally supports native compilation of Lisp files.
-To enable, configure Emacs with the '--with-native-compilation' option
-to the 'configure' script.  This requires to have the libgccjit
-library to be installed and functional.
+To enable this, configure Emacs with the '--with-native-compilation' option.
+This requires the libgccjit library to be installed and functional.
 
 ---
 ** Support for building with Motif has been removed.
 
-** Cairo graphics library is now used by default if found.
+** The Cairo graphics library is now used by default if present.
 '--with-cairo' is now the default, if the appropriate development files
 are found by 'configure'.  Note that building with Cairo means using
 Pango instead of libXFT for font support.  Since Pango 1.44 has