Improve the Emacs manual as suggested in emacs-manual-bugs

* doc/emacs/killing.texi (Deletion and Killing): Add
cross-reference to "Kill Ring".
* doc/emacs/help.texi (Help Mode, Package Keywords): Improve
wording.  Suggested by Will Korteland <emacs-devel@korte.land> in
emacs-manual-bugs@gnu.org.

diff --git a/doc/emacs/help.texi b/doc/emacs/help.texi
index 0aa4c501c2a1df1847ec5d97c4f08b651f3a1b8e..d4a03c746db1c0cd872e1f6d4b575b300ea93778 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/emacs/help.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/help.texi
@@ -462,14 +462,14 @@ command (@pxref{Browse-URL}).
 @findex backward-button
   In a help buffer, @key{TAB} (@code{forward-button}) moves point
 forward to the next hyperlink, while @kbd{S-@key{TAB}}
-(@code{backward-button}) point back to the previous hyperlink.  These
-commands act cyclically; for instance, typing @key{TAB} at the last
-hyperlink moves back to the first hyperlink.
+(@code{backward-button}) moves point back to the previous hyperlink.
+These commands act cyclically; for instance, typing @key{TAB} at the
+last hyperlink moves back to the first hyperlink.
 
   To view all documentation about any symbol in the text, move point
-to there and type @kbd{C-c C-c} (@code{help-follow-symbol}).  This
-shows all available documentation about the symbol---as a variable,
-function and/or face.
+to the symbol and type @kbd{C-c C-c} (@code{help-follow-symbol}).
+This shows all available documentation about the symbol---as a
+variable, function and/or face.
 
 @node Package Keywords
 @section Keyword Search for Packages
@@ -495,8 +495,8 @@ buffer (@pxref{Package Menu}).
 package (@pxref{Packages}, and displays a help buffer describing the
 attributes of the package and the features that it implements.  The
 buffer lists the keywords that relate to the package in the form of
-buttons.  Click on a button to see other packages related to that
-keyword.
+buttons.  Click on a button with @kbd{mouse-1} or @kbd{mouse-2} to see
+the list of other packages related to that keyword.
 
 @node Language Help
 @section Help for International Language Support

diff --git a/doc/emacs/killing.texi b/doc/emacs/killing.texi
index 7d95a440e33e961dcffde78d51c53006e2391441..9c9b85aa3d003ebe3cbc2df8b2b2907b589a21a6 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/emacs/killing.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/killing.texi
@@ -33,13 +33,13 @@ killing many different types of syntactic units.
 @cindex cutting text
 @cindex deletion
   Most commands which erase text from the buffer save it in the kill
-ring.  These are known as @dfn{kill} commands, and their names
-normally contain the word @samp{kill} (e.g., @code{kill-line}).  The
-kill ring stores several recent kills, not just the last one, so
-killing is a very safe operation: you don't have to worry much about
-losing text that you previously killed.  The kill ring is shared by
-all buffers, so text that is killed in one buffer can be yanked into
-another buffer.
+ring (@pxref{Kill Ring}).  These are known as @dfn{kill} commands, and
+their names normally contain the word @samp{kill} (e.g.,
+@code{kill-line}).  The kill ring stores several recent kills, not
+just the last one, so killing is a very safe operation: you don't have
+to worry much about losing text that you previously killed.  The kill
+ring is shared by all buffers, so text that is killed in one buffer
+can be yanked into another buffer.
 
   When you use @kbd{C-/} (@code{undo}) to undo a kill command
 (@pxref{Undo}), that brings the killed text back into the buffer, but