; * etc/NEWS: Minor copyedits.

diff --git a/etc/NEWS b/etc/NEWS
index aaf38022c581bcc3aa7407f3f3565468c0b1a00d..7483a6e5b75c68573b568c35a5ca3923bcf95415 100644 (file)
--- a/etc/NEWS
+++ b/etc/NEWS
@@ -91,9 +91,9 @@ true color by setting 'COLORTERM=truecolor' in the environment.  This is
 useful on systems such as FreeBSD which ships only with "etc/termcap".
 
 ** Emacs now supports loading a Secure Computing filter.
-This is supported only on capable GNU/Linux systems.  To use this,
-use the '--seccomp=FILE' command-line option when starting Emacs.
-FILE must name a binary file containing an array of 'struct sock_filter'
+This is supported only on capable GNU/Linux systems.  To activate,
+invoke Emacs with the '--seccomp=FILE' command-line option.  FILE must
+name a binary file containing an array of 'struct sock_filter'
 structures.  Emacs will then install that list of Secure Computing
 filters into its own process early during the startup process.  You
 can use this functionality to put an Emacs process in a sandbox to