; Yet another last-minute change in Emacs manual for printing

* doc/emacs/book-spine.texi:
* doc/emacs/back.texi: Minor copyedits.

diff --git a/doc/emacs/back.texi b/doc/emacs/back.texi
index ae0121e1a88bc4cef753afaefe16d2101d5805b4..343df709a8d7a90b84c8d69e3fbfa4fec75650b5 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/emacs/back.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/back.texi
@@ -48,6 +48,7 @@ The ability to:
 Create @strong{PostScript output} from plain-text files (special
 editing modes for @LaTeX{} and @TeX{} are included).
 
+
 @item
 @strong{Compile} and @strong{debug} from inside Emacs.
 
@@ -67,7 +68,7 @@ Enjoy the use of extensive @strong{merge} and @strong{diff} functions.
 
 @item
 Take advantage of built-in support for many @strong{version control
-systems}, including Git, Mercurial, Bazaar, Subversion, and CVS.
+systems,} including Git, Mercurial, Bazaar, Subversion, and CVS.
 
 @item
 And much more!
@@ -82,8 +83,8 @@ useful to expert users.  It also includes appendices with specific
 material about X and GTK resources, and with details for users of
 macOS and Microsoft Windows.
 
-And when you tire of all the work you can accomplish with it, Emacs
-contains games to play.
+And when you tire of all the work you can accomplish with Emacs, enjoy
+the games that come with it.
 
 @strong{About the original and principal author:}
 
@@ -97,3 +98,5 @@ honoris causa.
 
 @hfil
 @bye
+
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

diff --git a/doc/emacs/book-spine.texi b/doc/emacs/book-spine.texi
index 20e23ca2bf831af1d8c4c01e97ef8a71a4718f13..9634cceedaf71338472732b1ee40f4ef4866fce7 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/emacs/book-spine.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/book-spine.texi
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 
 @center @titlefont{GNU Emacs Manual}
 @sp 5
-@center @value{EDITION} edition, for Emacs Version @value{EMACSVER}
+@center @value{EDITION} edition, for Emacs version @value{EMACSVER}
 @sp 5
 
 @center by Richard M.@: Stallman et al.